http://gasconadead.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] gasconadead.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tenofspades 2011-08-31 07:45 pm (UTC)

[voice]

[ He jumps back -- which is good, because all she'll have seen of his expression is surprise. Once he's a foot back -- where she can no longer see his face, or any of him, really -- horror will seep into his expression.

It's ... mixed. Does she look gross? Yeah, sure. But at least half of his reaction -- probably more than half -- is horror at the fact that this was forced on her. That the Malnosso did this. Will she change back? What the hell kind of people do that to a girl?

When he comes back to the journal his expression is one of mixed shock, worry, incredulity, anger ... a lot of things. ]
They sure know how to treat a lady.

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